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Shale Virres

Post by agentaaa on Fri Apr 27, 2012 8:30 pm

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Name: Shale Virres
Age: 303
Homeworld: Entterin
Chosen God: Anima
General




Weapons:


  • Weapon 1
    Wind Katana: This fearsome weapon is infused with the elemental power of wind, and was made with the combined efforts of a thousand wind spirits, long, long ago. The blade itself has no special powers, except that it boosts it's owners strength, and the blade itself can cut through even enchanted armor with no resistance from the material. While it's never been tested as such, it's said that this weapon, with the right wielder, might even be able to harm the gods themselves.




Abilities:

  • Ability 1

    Incredible speed: Shale's physical abilities are all quite above average, but most notable is his speed, being trained by the wind spirits themselves to be able to cut away any air resistance to his movements, along with intense physical training. Even those amongst the generals of avalon have a healthy respect for how fast Shale can move.

  • Ability 2

    Wind slash: Shale is so skilled in the use of his blade that, with the help of battoujutsu, or the unsheathing technique, of bushido, Shale can unleash a slash of air at his opponents merely from the cut of his blade. this air wave can cut as well as steel, and is as fast as it's name and element imply.
    Because this is not a technique used by ki or magic, this ability costs nothing for Shale to use, other than the natural physical fatigue of quickly unsheathing a blade, and can be used consecutively without too much problem. However, due to how the wind slash affects the air around it, the absence of air causes Shale to need to wait a few seconds between slashes, until the balance of the atmosphere around him is reestablished.


Special Ability:

Ultimate wind slash: Shale uses his aeromancy to boost his wind slash further, creating a giant wave of air that can cause massive damage to the chosen target.



Biography:

Shale was born on the world of Enterrin, and quickly grew to become a strong warrior, rising high in his military leadership, before quitting, claiming the paperwork was "too stressful"

He was originally a very hot-blooded warrior first into battle and last to retreat, but he has mellowed out over the years, becoming very relaxed and peaceful, even in the midst of battle. He only wishes to train younger people, and needs to be pushed in some way to fight himself. This is usually done by harming one of his students, or being forced to do it by Anima. If his reason for fighting is the last, he can be quite a jerk about it and follow orders to the exact letter.

Despite his laidback attitude, he cares for all creatures, and hates those who recklessly destroy all around them. He wishes for nothing more than peace, so all can live in harmony and without pain in their lives
Anima convinced him to join her cause after several months of argument, his argument being he didn't want to do it.

Shale is quite skilled with his katana, and has mastered the wind slash, making him quite a high level opponent even amongst the myriad heroes already on Avalon.
He has also learned a move known as "tremor" which temporarily takes control of a large part of the earth and has it eat his opponent. This, however, blights the earth and kills it and anything living on it, so unless somehow controlled, he will not use this move even on pain of death.

He has, since the umbra incident, become well respected among the Anima ranks, and regularly completes high level missions for Anima along with Kael and Onyx, his two subordinates.





Last edited by agentaaa on Sat Apr 28, 2012 6:16 pm; edited 2 times in total

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Re: Shale Virres

Post by Quantum Rain on Sat Apr 28, 2012 7:41 am

Need to clean up your profile a bit, with the unlisted weapons slots and a few spacing issues. I would like spacing between abilities, weapons, and proper spacing in biographies.

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Re: Shale Virres

Post by agentaaa on Sat Apr 28, 2012 6:14 pm

got rid of the extra weapon slots and did some proper spacing there, is this good?

also added the red stuff in the title, since you recently added color nazi to your list of english-based naziisms.... nazisms... the stuff you get all riled up about.

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Re: Shale Virres

Post by Quantum Rain on Sat Apr 28, 2012 6:25 pm

Much better now.
Approved.

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