Xedar

Ignar looked out over the landscape before him, amazed by the beauty of the volcanic wasteland before him. Ignar is standing atop the tallest volcano in the area. Looking out for miles among the smaller volcanoes, Ignar spots a small group of Demons, even from here he can see the mark of Exitius upon their left upper-arm.

*Rytlock looks around for anything of intrest for the first bit its nothing and then he sees something a fireborn at the top of the closest volcano so he goes to investigate*

(attacking what?)

(just to let both of ya know, the forces of chaos and exitius are allied on Xedar, same as the animan and aeonian forces are allied against them. kthxbai).

I spot Rytlock and know he is walking to me, I draw my Great sword, kimgart "If it's a fight your looking for, I suggest you find it elsewhere" I yell to him

Im not looking to fight im just wondering what a fireborn is doing on my homeworld.

(Use some grammar... please) "I am here to fight for Chaos, I heard there were forces of Anima here" Ignar slides his Kimgart back into its sheath

(i told you im bad with punctuation) I'm also fighting for chaos and yes you are correct there are forces of anima here.

(Use quotation marks for things you say aka these thing --> "" <--) "Okay, point me in there Direction will you?"

(sorry jeez) "follow me i will show you"

(prolly last post here, since it'll help your RP's flow, and since this discussion'd be easier as a main rather than side topic, maybe start a OOC topic on it? I'm willing to help with basic grammar and the like)

(I dont understand scott, your ending our small rp we just started?)

(no, I'm telling you to move the OOC chat out of the RP you started, so you can focus on just typing the RP posts in here. Besides, it's fine to be showing braden how to use better grammar, but criticizing every single post is a bit much. Don't backseat roleplay.)

(thanks scott)

"And how can I know I can trust you?" Ignar reaches for Kimgart, resting his hand on the handle, ready to un-sheath it at a moments notice

"Because i am a charr we are one of the oldest races to worship chaos as our god plus I dont think your sword is anything to my armagedon.*Rytlock unsheathes armagedon showing its pure size*

Ignar unsheathes Kimgart, it immediately bursts into flames "Your sword may be big, but that will slow your swinging speed, and besides, yours isn't flammable" To prove my point I make kimgart flames become huge, so huge and hot you can feel them from 10 meters away.

"pathetic this planet is hot in the winter im used to flames." *rytlock sheathes armagedon* "if u want a fight you'll follow me."

"The sword isn't even enchanted just so you know, pull out your sword, I'll show you" I say as I begin to follow you, kimgart in my one hand, still on fire

*Rytlock unsheathes armagedon while leading you to the combat* "So what is this your showing me??

Armagedon suddenly burst into flames, the handle inexplicably doesn't warm even as the flames reach 200 degrees Celsius, "Your sword is on fire" I laugh at the expression on your face

"Take it away my blade was crafted by me i dont want anythign done by other people"

The fire instantly stops as Ignar drops the enchantment power "I'm sorry, as a fireborn, I have control over fire from the moment I'm born, lighting a sword on fire is a simple task for me." Ignar twirls Kimgart before sliding the still flaming sword into it's sheath, the fire extinguishing once the blade has entered the sheath. "So where exactly are these forces? How far away?"

"the forces are in the village at the bottom of the hill killing villagers.......lets go!"

"seems a bit Dark for forces of Aeon or Anima... But okay... and this can't be all" Ignar looks at the small group before him, unsheathing Kimgart